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Loved this! Gotta appreciate custodial staff - moon or anywhere else!

Your dialogue is superb, for real. I'm taking notes on good conversation writing!

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Thank you! I’ve been doing a lot of short conversation scenes for another work, so I suppose the practice has been paying off.

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What a great story! And I love how you focused on the janitors, the unglamorous work that keeps everyone alive!

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